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Hatred for another
thrown toward one your supposed to love
betrayal, lies,
physical escape so hard
a world created inside your mind
torn between the two.
A harsh reality
or a mental fantasy
feelings mirrored on both worlds
searching for ways to silence the pains
of reality
failing and falling deeper
falling forever.
©2004-2009 ~Irechan
:iconirechan:

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I was pissed off and this came into my head... If I had off thought of it 5mins earlier I probally wouldnt have put my fist through my wall..

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:icondramatica222:
I like this poem a lot!
:iconirechan:
Thanks, I glad you liked it!!
:iconblindme:
you can really sense the anger! thats very effective :)

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you're about as edgy as a satsuma
:iconirechan:
Thanks for the comment!!
:iconherrwinter:
I liked it...i liked it alote...
But i didnt understood it enough... though i red it like 3 times :)
But good job you write beautiful...

Anyway i have a poem about anger and anguish too...
Its called Anger
If you're intrested :)

bye :)
:iconirechan:
Yea I love to read your poem!! Im guessin its on DA? Mes gonna go look for it now...
As for my weird piece of writing, I wrote it about someone whom I loved and thought they loved me and then betrayed me in a really nasty way... I got really depressed and found myself daydreamin alot and wishing I could be somewhere else. Or at least thats what I trying to say! ^_^

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You're just Jealous because the voices only talk to me.
:iconkodyparton04:
Hell yes. The falling for two people things i completely relate to. And you put so well. At times you love the fact and other times it destroys you.

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