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Literature Text
Enclosed in a room with strangers
familiar faces I don’t know
Conversation - a lost art
ignored, pushed aside, alone
watching from outside
wishing to be included, but fearful and knowing
things rarely change
people rarely change
world moves forward, but
opinions freeze, stuck in time
something must change
eventually
familiar faces I don’t know
Conversation - a lost art
ignored, pushed aside, alone
watching from outside
wishing to be included, but fearful and knowing
things rarely change
people rarely change
world moves forward, but
opinions freeze, stuck in time
something must change
eventually
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This is a very good piece. Your structure is very good as well as the poem itself. One thing you may look at is the grammer. At the beginning of every line, or if not most, should be a capital letter. Other then that its very good indeed! Keep up the good work! 